My alarm clock!

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a poem I wrote expressing my feelings towards my alarm clock!!!

Every morning I'm calm and sleeping
until that stupid box starts beeping.
The annoyance made is pretty drastic.
Caused by an evil piece of plastic.

I fling my hand upon its top.
and scream and yell for it to stop.
please, just seven minutes more.
the same thing I've said each day before.

But as for the sudden screaming war.
there really is no point no more
For the fact i know that all my sorrow
Will be here, same time, same way, tomorrow.


Submitted: August 04, 2009

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zenith

haha nice xD

Tue, August 4th, 2009 6:16pm

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Thank you :)

Tue, August 4th, 2009 11:24am

hhhh

Amazing! I absolutely love it! It was seriously amazing! The ritual of waking up, I got so sick of my alarm clock, I just stop turning it on and let my instincts do the waking up! The most annoying sound ever in the morning, I want to kill every alarm clock around and the way you put it, how it will be the same tomorrow, really made this great! Definately want to read this over! It was so good!

Wed, August 5th, 2009 7:20pm

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Thank you!!!!!!!! I really wanted to put across my hatred towards my alarm clock!!! At least I know I'm not the only one that hates getting woken up by theirs haha!! Thanks, for the great review!!!! Much appreciated!!! :)

Wed, August 5th, 2009 12:33pm

adypants

this is perfect. no other words: it's brilliant and portrays exactly what I feel when that "evil piece of plastic" wakes me up. Great job. :)

Thu, August 6th, 2009 3:25am

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Thank you!!!!!! :)

Thu, August 6th, 2009 4:06am

dubl

this was comical. nicely done haha i think everyone has that feelin :]

Thu, August 6th, 2009 3:25pm

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Haha!! Thank you!!!

Thu, August 6th, 2009 9:01am

BLOODTHIRSTY

wow i love it. Everyone will agree alarm clocks suck. people say its the noise i just think its the fact they have to get up pisses them off

Tue, September 1st, 2009 10:05pm

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Haha!! I have to agree with you on that one!!! Thank you!!

Tue, September 1st, 2009 3:06pm

palewriter

How true. A part of life indeed that everyone relates to. You've explained it well. good job.

Wed, September 9th, 2009 1:42pm

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:) Thank you!!

Wed, September 9th, 2009 8:15am

Riley Donahue

LOL classic

Mon, September 14th, 2009 5:03pm

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Haha, thanks!

Mon, September 14th, 2009 10:32am

Felipe Lima

BRAVO!! I loved it! I could totally understand wht you mean. Everyday I have the same stupid fight with my alarm clock. And your last lines are very intense. I know exactly how it is wake up every single day so angry that you can even scream.

Best Regards
Felipe :]

Sun, October 25th, 2009 12:23am

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