Poem by: Cleo96
Submitted: March 19, 2013
Heat slowly changing
Children playing with leaves
Birds resonating in the breeze
Dry leaves on ground
Mound of leaves
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I loved the way you described Autumn :)
thanks it basically sums up autumn
I agree with Emma, the way u summoned it up was short, simple and effective! I love it :)
Hi nice poem. Very short and to the point. I like that. The autumn that happens near you sounds a lot better than the one around here. Also, I don't think you want the word resonate in the context you've used it. Resonate is something that a noise or sound does. You could say "Bird calls resonating in the breeze".
Sorry, I meant "birds swaying"
or something like that. I reread my comment and had a major facepalm moment
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