Birthday Message

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

To your loved one

The day has come for celebration and fun,
wake up the sleepy sun and start the birds
singing because I want this to be the best,
a day of cake, cold champagne and cheer.
It's your birthday, my dear, no doubt see on
the wall, the many cards and the messages
from us all. So raise your glass and drink a
toast.
Happy Birthday, Darling.
You are the most.


Submitted: June 07, 2010

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Capman

Send this puppy to Hallmark.

Thu, June 10th, 2010 4:35am

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Oh I wish I could. They seem to be very clicky. It's that kind of market. Feel free to use or pass on.
Best wishes

Thu, June 10th, 2010 1:44am

FeathereMoon

I gotta say its good, but since some of my birthdays havent had anything in them from loved ones to beer i get sad reading it.
I would be greatful if you could tell me what you think about my witing. Thank you

Tue, June 15th, 2010 7:06pm

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Hi , I'm glad you liked. A little bit of fun. Anybody can use it, write it on a blank card.FeatherMoon is an interesting tag. Feather means as in light as and Moon is light at night. Then, of course, the spirit of the moon is Miakoda. On top of all hat a lot of people in China share your birthday. Millions in fact so it must be an important one.
And I'll take a look at what you've written. No problem .
Best wishes

Tue, June 15th, 2010 7:09pm

imagination101

LOVED IT! GREAT FOR A BIRTHDAY CHEER!

Sat, September 18th, 2010 5:46pm

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Thanks . Feel free to use it or write it on a card you send. If it is your own birthda then a cheer from us all. Hear that they all joined in.
Best

Thu, September 30th, 2010 9:33pm

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