Don't be unsaid

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Motivational poetry, , sinical

Don't be unsaid by Kelly-Jean Rice a.k.a. cloudsgrey

Why be so content in nature. You let yourself be who you are and nothing more. Growing out is better, seclusion is good, but there are other things.

Other things, of other beings, other things of growing nature, growing children being outgoing like you once were as a child.

Your pasts' greyist history, The clouds showing up accompanying. Even green and yellow persisting outside your window And no one knows it's always been unsaid, unjust. You've been conversational and particularly annoying. Nothing exists without it, no people, no you, no horse shit.

It is unsaid unless it is unsaid. You can hear the birds call. Thats all. The birds see all. Only the birds see all.

Submitted: April 23, 2010

Poetry poetry motivational sinical

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Nefert High Priestess

I like your poem. It was nice. If ya want, check out my novel :].

Fri, April 23rd, 2010 2:15am

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I will, I havent yet but i will!!

Thu, April 22nd, 2010 9:27pm

prateeksha

i like it. its nice

Fri, April 30th, 2010 1:19pm

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thank you so much, and for the comment.

Fri, April 30th, 2010 11:45am

JusticeJames

I really like this one, I love how you describe the things in there, "greyish history", "green and yellow persisting outside your window", love it.

Fri, June 11th, 2010 6:09pm

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that is awesome you 'identify' with it. or get it. thanx!

Fri, June 11th, 2010 11:21am

Capman

I prefer seclusion
Every time I leave
I come back defeated
annoyed and
embarrased
with myself

I dont know if
other people are
annoyed and
embarrased
with me

If the birds can truly
See all
Then I wonder
Why they don't
Leave.

Sun, June 13th, 2010 9:28pm

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i prefer seclusion.... a am a recluse at hearet, but my new meds seem to be changing my life it is weird. ha i see what u mean, but the birds see all because the need to keep the earth alive so we can die.

Sun, June 13th, 2010 2:33pm

Capman

Then perhaps I should stop chasing them away.

Sun, June 13th, 2010 9:38pm

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indeed i am a bit vaige, i like to keep things dark and lite, i am bipolar

Sun, June 13th, 2010 2:42pm

sunnyheeth

"it is a picture of the shit hanging from my car mirror" haha. awesome poem.

Tue, June 22nd, 2010 8:33am

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i had to add you as a fan, you comment was too funny.............