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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

suicide, what ifs plotting suicide

The cold doesn't belong in your eyes, Never have i seen the mask as dark as ever, as I have before. Never have I ever wanted you more. Simple nature.. dark souls connect. Don' make me take myself way from you. It hurts. Don't ever let me go... Some things i need to know.. Hotel, you alone, Christmas eve, what to do.. What do you do.. You do what I do right now, but more intense, more plotting,,,,,,,.......


Submitted: May 10, 2010

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EdwardJBradleySr

cloudsgrey:

Ordinarily, would not comment on such a posting. Because I am not a mental health professional.

Can't say anything as to the extent to which anyone else would want to read this. It's meaning is most vague.

Just the same, gave it an "I Like It" vote.

In my posting on "Teen Suicide", I do not offer an opinion. Just some facts about an actual event. As reported in a local Albany, N.Y. newpaper.

Happier trails,

Ed Bradley.

Sun, May 9th, 2010 12:45pm

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I am happy, and i have figured my life out, now starting my own business, things are looking great... I feel a purpose in life....... Thank you so much for your sincerity. and reading up on me. much love.....

Sun, May 9th, 2010 6:26am

cloudsgrey

it was a friend whom had comited suicide that evening

Sun, May 9th, 2010 1:28pm

xOxOxOFcukM3xOxOx13

I was slightly confused reading and listening to this,
but it sounded good...

Sun, May 9th, 2010 2:37pm

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thank you, it was a regret a had to pass through and come to terms with by a lovers suicide.

Sun, May 9th, 2010 7:40am

xOxOxOFcukM3xOxOx13

oh im sorry to hear that :(

Sun, May 9th, 2010 3:39pm

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Just saying people should NEVER kill them selves there is help. Suicide is LAME!!!!!!!!!

Sun, May 9th, 2010 9:01am

Holmes

I loved that so much! It got me reminded me of a friend, and really, I loved that!

Mon, May 10th, 2010 4:34am

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the feeling to reach someone is mucho greater than the feeling i get writing the poem itself, thank you so much!!!------ take care. glad to make you feel better, if so..

Mon, May 10th, 2010 2:16am

Ben Walker

woah what an intense poem the audio voice was a nice touch she sounded like she meant it.

Mon, May 10th, 2010 1:20pm

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AW thanks that was ME, im glad i can get into your mind.... tee hee

Mon, May 10th, 2010 8:49am

Nefert High Priestess

I so enjoy your writing. You post so much and I have so little time to read it all :P. I will get to all of it sooner or later. I love this though, nice touch with the audio :D.

Tue, May 11th, 2010 12:38am

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You rule, all of you guys, thank you so much for everything!

Mon, May 10th, 2010 5:48pm

Xavier Sekula

The audio is really haunting. Lovely poem.

Tue, May 11th, 2010 4:23pm

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haunting is good, ooh

Tue, May 11th, 2010 9:27am

Infallible Folly

Deep poem. Like the guy above me said, the audio's haunting (in a good way lol) and I can tell you meant it.

Thu, May 13th, 2010 7:08pm

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i have a bunch more haunting audeo added!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thu, May 13th, 2010 10:06pm

cloudsgrey

too many things too deep i have too add audio, it just needs it i guess

Thu, May 13th, 2010 8:31pm

Capman

Indeed more plotting.

Tue, June 22nd, 2010 6:37am

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he did

Tue, June 22nd, 2010 7:18am

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