you don't have to die!

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suicide prevention

You don't have to die. I don't care what you've done , broken a heart hurt hard on someone. But People get over it, we are built to be strong, you are too. You may have cut yourself, but you will heal, and you will be stronger in the years, so many years it will be to figure yourself out, thick it through. But you don't have to die! The world, it wants you! It say's to you, the sky stays put to hold you down. The people you hate, really are inspiring, and are there for you to motivate. And medication isn't scary, some people need it. But you don't have to die, seriously. Everything loves you.


Submitted: May 10, 2010

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Ben Walker

Great poem it was nice of you to try to stop someone from killing themselves.

Mon, May 10th, 2010 1:14am

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i almost have, i have had a lover that did, no one needs to die!, thank you for understanding! and kind words

Sun, May 9th, 2010 6:23pm

cloudsgrey

yeah its weird, a note to myself ina way too? good thought. happiness makes people not mad.

Mon, May 10th, 2010 1:30am

cloudsgrey

the world needs us people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mon, May 10th, 2010 1:31am

angellynn

Very good. Thanks for the invite.
Angellynn:D

Mon, May 10th, 2010 7:30am

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Of corse, i hope you can enjoy visiting my profile, thanks for the read and comment!!!

Mon, May 10th, 2010 2:13am

IAmHiding

True I have pretty much found ways to vent that work. Writing is one of them. I have other blogs and writing other than my crazy ones where i cuss. I am not as crazy as i once was. I am getting to old for craziness.

Mon, May 10th, 2010 2:14pm

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Mon, May 10th, 2010 8:48am

Chloe the guitar girl

Now i found what it was. well this is very beautifully written and i think reading this could help people, great job, great work. =)

Mon, May 10th, 2010 4:56pm

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Suicide is the lamest thing ever, but then again...it is whom evers choice, thogh it fucking should NEVER happen!!!!

Mon, May 10th, 2010 10:58am

Nefert High Priestess

Suicide = OMGreallydumbandbad. But some people like the easy way out. I like this. It could have helped many people I used to know :P. Good writing :].

Tue, May 11th, 2010 12:41am

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ah yes, thank you, i know so many people understnd, we just need to talk about it more , you know.

Mon, May 10th, 2010 5:47pm

Snow412

Dieing is easy. Living is hard.

This poem was gently crafted and a bit eerie. I loved the ending though, and the general hope in it all.

Thank you for sharing.

Fri, July 16th, 2010 10:41am

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True that. im living through hard times right now. in a hole. it was nice to re read this poem actually for myself. thank you for sharing it back to me!

Fri, July 16th, 2010 9:14am

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