lonely noose

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

Feeling threatened and finally saying good bye.

lonely noose…
There was a noose around my neck.
I didn’t even notice at first.
Walking on a thin, thin line.
One wrong step
And I would pay greatly.
Pay greatly indeed.
My breath becomes gasps.
Not being able to breathe.
Feeling threatened
No matter where I went.
The noose was so tight
I could barely breathe!
I couldn’t take it.
So I turned to the person,
Controlling the noose.
 I smiled and told the person
“Sorry but you have no power anymore.”
I tug the noose over my head.
I breathe in that sweet air.
That sweet…
I jumped off the thin line,
To the safe ground below.
I smile up at the person
With the lonely noose in their hand.
I waved good bye,
With a smile.
I look to the ground,
Letting one single tear escape
And fall to the floor.
Secretly saying farewell to my old life.
 And the once terrible
But now lonely noose.

Submitted: June 13, 2010

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Commitment problems? lol I found the imagery quite humorous. Really nice poem.

Sun, June 13th, 2010 8:55pm


I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the comment :)

Sun, June 13th, 2010 3:30pm

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