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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Not sure just came to me...

As red as the evening Sun

the rose lies there on the

Table lifeless... dying.

 

Even through it looks like

There is life there is none

It... disappeared.

 

Just like I did the night that

You said I wasn't worth you

Time... pathetic.

 

The life just slowly fades out 

Of me as I think that one day 

You'll return... stupid.

 

As stupid I was to believe you

Loved me I was stupider to

Wait on you... sad.


Submitted: June 28, 2013

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Lisa Ayers

Interesting read as you began a poem about a broken relationship with a rose laying on the table.

I like this.

Fri, September 6th, 2013 12:50am

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Thank you so much :)

Thu, September 5th, 2013 6:18pm

bobthebuilder

Fantastic imagery! Really well done!

Thu, September 26th, 2013 10:50pm

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Oh thank you :)

Fri, September 27th, 2013 4:51am

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