All of Time V2

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

2nd version

All of time—
A spectacle of brilliance.
Victory?
In silence waiting, wanting.
Limping on—
With hands of clapping mountains.
Falling down…
The bird of lost abandon.
 
Underneath,
The cliffs and rocks and teeth,
Another crash another wasted life.
Reaching up,
Toward distant blinding stars,
I will wait,
I will wait,
For it.
 
 


Submitted: September 02, 2008

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Classy Peach

Eeeeyep, this is nice. Great imagery.

Wed, September 3rd, 2008 1:12am

Author
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Thanks!

Tue, September 2nd, 2008 6:14pm

RaisinGirl

I like this one too-especially the form u wrote it in...off to 3...

Wed, September 3rd, 2008 2:18am

Author
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Thanks again.

Tue, September 2nd, 2008 7:24pm

devilrod

Similar, but a slightly amended structure. I like it , but I'm still going with V1.

Mon, September 8th, 2008 9:29pm

Author
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Ok. Thanks.

Mon, September 8th, 2008 3:44pm

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