Angel Face

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic
He sees her...but how? shes supposed to be dead

Submitted: April 01, 2008

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He couldn't believe it. After wishing, and hoping and dreaming, he finally found the girl of his dreams. She had blond hair, blue eyes, ruby red lips, and a face made from the finest frost. She was thin, but not too thin; she laughed with a twinkle in her eye. She was perfect. Her name was Angel. Angel was spending the night at David's house, while her parents were away. David was reading the paper; he flipped to the backside and noticed that there was an obituary. He began reading. Suddenly, he stopped and put the paper down. Angel was smiling at him her pearly white teeth gleaming in the sun. He picked up the paper and read it carefully: "In Memory of Angel Davis, who was raped, beaten, and murdered by her boyfriend last night at the Cozy Inn Motel. She will be deeply missed by all may her soul rest in peace" David couldn't believe what he was reading. Surely this was some sort of joke--a sick joke. He put down the paper and touched Angel's hand. It was ice cold, Quietly he asked, "Do you know something about this? She smiled at him with a beautiful smile, and vanished before his eyes….

David looked back at the paper, and noticed that the obituary he was reading, had vansihed...as if he dreamt of reading the sad news. He looked back and Angel was right there, sitting in a chair smiling at him. He cocked an eyebrow. "Are you living or dead?" David asked. Slowly, very slowly, angel spoke. "The deceased come back to claim what was once their's, and you David Mallar, have done me wrong, I loved you but all you wanted was to take advantage of me!" The young girl vanished once more, then, David grabbed his heart as if he was trying to keep the pain away from his vital organ, and, he fell to the ground, drowning in his own sweat.

The girl appeared again, wiping her hands that was stained with crimson blood. "you had your fun at the Cozy in Motel, and now I had my fun," She sneered at the lifeless body, before turning away and vanishing into the bright and holy aurora.


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