Mystery Girl That Came and Left

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is of a girl I dated back in eighth grade and she was the one that made me take poetry seriously

Three years back,
As far as I can remember,
I was a young 13 year old,
Had a girl who was turning 14 before me,
She was a blonde with blue eyes,
As our times started getting harder,
I had my eyes on this girl,
She had black hair and brown eyes,
Didn’t know her name,
Could only blush when she talked to me,
So once the blonde let me go, I felt lonely,
Than the black haired girl named Danielle came into the picture,
Who could’ve guessed a guy like me with a girl like her,
We were young and in love,
But on the 26th our troubles just begun,
We didn’t fight at all,
The thing is we didn’t see each other that much as we wanted and it hurt us,
We loved each other to death,
But somehow that mystery girl,
Came and left my life,
Leaving me like a shadow
But now it hurts when we love each other and can’t see each other

Submitted: February 16, 2011

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Awwwwwwwwwwwww =/ this is sad but amazing ...well done. Sorry to hear about the girl doe.

Wed, February 16th, 2011 7:58am


It kinda sucked but you kinda grow use to the pain you think won't ever happen.

Wed, February 16th, 2011 12:51am

Imagine Words

This is very sad but very good, good work your poems are good :D

Tue, May 17th, 2011 1:51pm


Thank you.

Tue, May 17th, 2011 7:13am

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