Outside looking around

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Being on the outside looking around

There are more than two ways to go

On the outside looking in at least you know

You know exactly where you want to be

Inside looking out there is tons of things to see

But I'm not inside and I don't belong

Everything I've tried I've done all wrong

Looking for something that can't be found

I'm on the outside and looking around

Atleast on the inside looking out you are somewhere

I don't even know what to do out here

I don't know if I want to be inside

I don't know if I'm feeling shame or pride

So should I see the bright lights as blinding?

Or as someone's spotlight trying to find me?

is my head in the sky or on the ground?

I'm on the outside looking around

Submitted: June 16, 2008

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Kirsten Rain

First comment. Hehe. I loved it!

Tue, June 24th, 2008 7:21am


Thanks. =]

Tue, June 24th, 2008 9:36am

Lady Elizabeth

Again, you're twisting things we've always thought about in new directions, and I'm really enjoying it! Keep up the good work!

Wed, July 2nd, 2008 4:54am


Thank you. ^_^

Wed, July 2nd, 2008 10:41am

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