Thailand

Poem by: coolbadgirl

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unami that hit thailand

Thrashing against the city

Everyone was scared

And thinking ‘what will we do’

Help help what shall we do

The waves are so big

They’re flood every house, building

With everyone inside

What shall we do

You can’t get to Thailand

Quick enough to save us

Just one favour

Think about us everyday

Please help us

And live without guilt

Thailand will never be the same

Help help what shall we do

This makes me sad

And want to cry

Thousands maybe millions

Died in Thailand that day

The unumi struck

Submitted: May 18, 2009

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Brian W

"Tsunami" A good poem about the terrible thing that happened and killed so many people, many washed out to sea never to be found. Well written

Mon, August 17th, 2009 5:28am

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thanks i did when i was in junior school and when i was going through things i found this and thought to publish it

Thu, August 20th, 2009 3:02pm

i hate kung fu frogs

You told me to look at this, and I did. XD
I like this. It is a sad topic, but sadness is ironically where some of the best work comes from. I like this! You should definately write more like this one. XD

Fri, March 26th, 2010 11:32pm

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thnx! i write better sad poems than other poems unless i have help from a teacher!!! thnx 4 checking it out!!!

Fri, March 26th, 2010 5:27pm

angellynn

This is very sad. I feel so bad for the people there. It truly is a horrible thing. Nature can be so cruel at times. Very well written. Sorry it has taken me so long to read as i promised.
Angellynn:)

Sun, September 5th, 2010 5:44pm

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its fine! glad u liked this poem!

Sun, September 5th, 2010 3:16pm