Will I Live Once Agin?

Poem by: coolbadgirl

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this is a poem i wrote for a picture challenge! its my first gothic, dark poem so any comments 2 say how it could b improved or any advise i dont mind but dont say bad bad bad bad bad things!

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Submitted: December 27, 2009

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Submitted: December 27, 2009

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Darkness rips at my blinding eyes
My expressionless face turns pale with disbelief
The sunlight seeping through the shattered window
While I sit here in the darkness
The darkness that haunts me
The darkness that brings back memories
Of that one night I lost everything
The vines draped across the walls
Acting as curtains
Keeping the damaged window from cracking
Through my dress the concrete was like ice
The concrete which was once my home
The holes that surround me
Are like eyes watching me
Bringing more suffering than I am living now
The bruises forming on my arms
Are now just a memory
A memory which will be with me for eternity
The cuffed bracelets
Digging into my skin
Tearing away at the flesh
The more I thought
The more the hell become hell
Will I live through this hell?
Will I live once again?


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Will I Live Once Agin?

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Genre: Horror

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Genre: Horror

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this is a poem i wrote for a picture challenge! its my first gothic, dark poem so any comments 2 say how it could b improved or any advise i dont mind but dont say bad bad bad bad bad things!
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