A poem of mine a wrote a few months ago, i actually wrote this the day before i found out my boyfriend didn't love me anymore :(

My heart is breaking

Tears are snaking

down my cheeks

my heart feels hallow

and all i can do is sit here and wallow

in my own fucking sorrow

this shit is just so hard to swallow

hopefully i'll be stronger tomorrow

but until then i just dont know what road to follow


im feeling numb

kinda bummed out

about this shit

i just need something to hit

otherwise i'll go mental

i'm fed up being of being gentle

because when i'm gentle everyone hurts me

and right now my eyes are full of so many tears,

i can't see


boys are useless

full of excuses

they always hurt you in the end

that's why it's best to just keep them as friends

until you grow up

and you're certain you're in love

and they they're not just another prick

who's gunna hurt you and leave your heart in bits

make sure he's the one for you

and that he really does love you too

'cos break-ups suck

and hurt like fuck

'cos trust me, i should know

i've been done that road too many times before

so next time, i'll make sure

that's i wont be left torn up

and that he'll be there to catch me when i fall

and stick with me through it all

Submitted: December 31, 2011

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Marcele Rose

raw and honest...i like how your emotions show in this

Thu, February 2nd, 2012 1:43am


thankyou :)

Thu, February 2nd, 2012 9:29am

Acie Anderson

This is very good! I enjoyed it so much.

Sat, February 4th, 2012 5:19pm


thankyou :D x

Sat, February 4th, 2012 10:19am

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