Depression's Darkness

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

Depression overwhelms even the strongest.

Cowering in the darkness,

I use it as a shield,

worthless to all else,

now I use it to wield.

Pale skin,

cold as ice,

Living life to me,

is always rolling the dice.

Ghosts of those I loved,

walk around me now,

everything has left me,

I can't bother to ask myself how.

Into the background,

do I blend,

and quietly to myself,

I pray for an end.

Bleeding helps me none,

Pills don't help the pain,

Just to move,

I find,

only causes me great strain.

Drinking only effects my speed,

though to be honest,

it's nothing I really need.

As angry thoughts dance about in my head,

I think about how much I've bled,

not physically, of course,

but mentally was so much worse.

Breathing is alway a bore,

for it seems death,

will be so much more.

And to you now,

I shall be discreet,

I'm admitting to defeat,

all I wish for now,

is for death do I meet.


Submitted: November 13, 2011

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writersbug

Wow, that was a really good poem, one of my favorites I've read on here, actually. Nice work!! It had a powerful meaning, good flow, and just an overall good scheme. Great job!!

Sun, November 13th, 2011 6:26pm

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Thank you so much. That means a lot coming from an amazing author!

Sun, November 13th, 2011 7:45pm

LTskittles125

i can relate to this... its kinda scary with how much it reminds me of myself.. Check out some of my stuff? Please and thanks.
great job

Mon, November 14th, 2011 1:43am

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Thanks. And I will definately check out some of your stuff lol.

Sun, November 13th, 2011 7:46pm

Imagine Words

Good poem love how it rhymes but in certain parts it is a bit off, still a great poem though :D

Mon, November 14th, 2011 12:44pm

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Thanks! I'll work on the off bits

Wed, November 16th, 2011 4:07pm

RiotSkullkid

heeeey this poem was great! sounds like a super i-dont-give-a-fudge mood is goin on and i can relate to this Alot! =D

Mon, November 14th, 2011 1:48pm

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lol thanks!

Wed, November 16th, 2011 4:07pm

Silvermay

That's definatley a favourite
Probably my favourite poem on booksie
I live how you wrote it
And I think you have amazing talent,actually I don't think you have amazing talent I know you have amazing talent.

Tue, November 15th, 2011 1:52pm

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Thank you so much! You don't know how much that means to me!

Wed, November 16th, 2011 4:08pm

Blackdragon99

Wow mate I'm touch. i can relate to this a little too much.

Sat, November 19th, 2011 12:57am

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Oh, I'm sorry... That's the bad thing about this poem. It's too relatable.

Sat, November 19th, 2011 8:02am

Sgroi123

Really good maybe being able to relate to a poem is a good thing that's what i thought.

Thu, November 24th, 2011 9:43pm

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Thank you!

Sun, November 27th, 2011 12:32pm

meenakshi sharma

what you said wa evything corect , when depression overwhelms us then we just want death .. away from this world.. a very good piece of work .. i like it .. :) :) TC

Mon, January 7th, 2013 7:20am

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Thank you :) I was trying to portray it as realistic as possible.

Mon, January 7th, 2013 8:14am

animefreak77L

Ok well I'm totally speechless. This is like one of the best poems I've read in awhile. Ur a great writer with a lot of important things to say. I can totally understand this n I just wish more people would write About these sorta things. Well done uve caught my attention. Lol

Tue, January 15th, 2013 8:48am

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Thank you! And I don't know, I think writing about these things can be really difficult. I had to face a lot of my own personal problems, and then posting it for everyone to see? Well. It's not easy, to say the least. And thank you for thinking that I'm a good writer :) that means a lot to me.

Tue, January 15th, 2013 4:54pm

Ella Lynn

:O.....I wish I could write like that!!! Its so strongly worded and the rhymes werent forced, This was beautiful in every way shape and form, and I'm a harsh critiquer-ish person!

Tue, January 15th, 2013 11:46pm

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0.0 whoooooa. That's.... Thank you! :D

Tue, January 15th, 2013 4:56pm

Indie Skreet

you do depressing even better than me, I think. I hope this was a passing state of mind for you .... and that 'is' a compliment by the way :)

Fri, February 1st, 2013 12:44am

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Alrighty, well thank you :) and like most things, it comes and goes as it pleases... It's pretty much an old friend at this point. Thank you for reading.

Thu, January 31st, 2013 5:31pm

HiKitty

You are an excellent writer.. but is this true??? I want to say that if it is-I think you are a beautiful and strong person to keep going like that when you least wanted to. If it isn't-then I still think you are a beautiful and strong person-but you describe with such vivid imagery that I wouldve thought you were in that situation-great job you do have an wxcellent way with words-Amazing.. xx

Sun, February 17th, 2013 1:09pm

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Yeah, it's true.... I'm not proud of it, necessarily, but if someone can learn from my mistakes, why not post it? And thank you for reading and your kind words. C:

Sun, February 17th, 2013 7:25am

HiKitty

aww, now I hear that it is true, I want to say keep strong xx I know giving up seems simple and sometimes things are just too much too keep up...but believe me-things get better :) :) And yeah-feel proud of posting- not everyone can bring up times like this; let alone to the entire world of the internet...

Mon, February 18th, 2013 12:47pm

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Thank you :) And I do feel proud about it.

Mon, February 18th, 2013 7:20am

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