Everlasting

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a poem of two people who share a love that makes them both complete.

 

You. Me.

We stand here, at the top of the mountain.

Below us, the dark blue sea churns rapidly;

The wind blows your curls ever so gracefully.

You turn,

You look at me,

Compassion in your beautiful green eyes.

Once we were here before –

That time it was you who rescued me.

Now, as I pull my body close to yours –

Our lips meet in an everlasting kiss.

Happy thoughts surround us both,

And I never want to leave this place.

 


Submitted: December 28, 2006

© Copyright 2022 Corinne Smith. All rights reserved.

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Tyrone Slade

I thought it was plan, but a good idea.

Thu, December 28th, 2006 10:36pm

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Thank you. Do you think I should make it longer? What are your suggestions on how to change it?

Thu, December 28th, 2006 4:12pm

EdwardJBradleySr

Corinne:

Well written. Nice warm theme to which most can relate.

Happy trails and a Happy 2007,

Ed Bradley.

Sun, December 31st, 2006 4:00am

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Thank you very much. Same to you!

Mon, January 1st, 2007 4:39pm

Mandy

Very nice poem, Love the way you worded it.

Wed, January 10th, 2007 11:28pm

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Thank you!

Wed, January 10th, 2007 8:15pm

Lindsay

amazing. you give me chills

Fri, January 12th, 2007 11:49pm

Whit Wall

love love love it

Mon, August 6th, 2007 6:16am

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Thanks Whit :)

Mon, December 31st, 2007 1:33pm

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