LIFE IS.....

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Reflexions about life

Life

Life is a wonderful thing,

nothing compares to it.

Life allow us to live,

life allows us to die.

Life make us strong,

life makes us feel small.

Life allow us to grow,

life allow us to lie.

Life is a moment in time,

life is a blink of an eye.

Life is a prison without bars,

our actions will take care of that.

Life makes us believe,

life makes us cry.

Life is a dream,

life is an ....ice cream?



Submitted: May 21, 2008

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Wandiola

really good, i liked how you used life at the beginning of each new line, but the flow is stopped in some places like"life make us feel small." shouldn't it be "life makes us feel small"
great job!!!

Wed, June 4th, 2008 1:34am

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You are right,thanks for letting me know...

Wed, June 4th, 2008 7:01am

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tin2twinkling

hey good job on this, very simple ad yet very elegant at the same time. it has good flow and great imagery.. excellent!! =)

Sun, June 22nd, 2008 6:38am

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Thanks again....

Mon, June 23rd, 2008 7:08am

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