Smile *Poem*

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A Short Poem

Everyone sees a smile
So they assume everything is okay
But little does everyone know, that behind the smile
is a girl who is very far from okay.

They see a girl laughing
So they have no idea to assume anything is wrong.
But little do they know that if the girl is not laughing
She will let the world know exactly what is wrong.

They see a girl living this perfect life
So they just believe that everything is easy
But little does everyone know, that she has very far from a perfect life
And nothing she is going through would be classified as Easy

So the world may see her smile
So they think that she is okay
But little do they know behind her smile
She is girl, who is planning suicide, just to feel okay.

Submitted: March 17, 2013

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Aww, a sadly, powerfully emotional little poem. I feel your pain and do wish the best. Incredibly heartfelt. A calling. Pleading for mercy from the world. But the world is abrasive and uncaring. Some deeply touching stuff. I hope you feel better though. Making though and being stronger when you do, although seeming impossible, is what has to be done. For this world needs all the soulful people that it can possible hang on to, for as time passes it seems as more and more of society is soulless and without a heart. Please do come check out some of my works, if you like? I'm sure you'll find something that you may enjoy, I have many dark works. :)

Sun, March 17th, 2013 5:40am


Because I know you and for so long, this hurts me to read. At the same time, it touches on a familiar cord deep inside me. ?

Mon, March 18th, 2013 2:49pm

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