Words I Choose

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

The words that i wish to say to my friend. I love you so much i hope you know that and im for you.

Happiness comes,
and happiness goes,
but I wish it didn’t go by,
-- so fast.
I knew it was to good,
to good to be true,
to good,
-- to last.
I’ve told you everything
there is to know
about me and
-- my past.
I see it everyday
the words that we say
cut people down
-- so fast.
I wish you could stay
so I pray
for your will power
-- to last.
There is nothing to do
Nothing we can say,
to take away,
-- the past.
Fast, last, and past,
are words I choose.
Not just because they rhyme,
or that they keep time.
but because,
don’t you see?
How much you mean to me?
You make my heart beat fast,
you’re the one I want to see last,
and I don’t want you to be simply
-part of my past.
Do you see now,
just how,
you make me think,
and how my mind goes blank.
When I see you,
and when I hear you.
Your voice so sweet,
lifts me of my feet.
A ray of sunshine,
on my cloudy day.
What more is there to say?


Submitted: September 15, 2008

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storyofmylife

good job

Mon, September 15th, 2008 1:59am

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thank you

Mon, September 15th, 2008 5:24pm

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todeszellen91

hehe
good poem, rly describes ur heart.
but once again: LET IM GO!

Mon, September 15th, 2008 11:39pm

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I TRY!! i rly do :( but thanks for the comment ,/../

Mon, September 15th, 2008 5:26pm

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GiGi Joy

love to poem, but i agree with joel....let him go...obviously writing poems about him are not helping in the least

Fri, September 19th, 2008 8:27pm

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thanks for the comment yes i should move on and no my poems arent helping anything but they still are fun to write

Fri, September 19th, 2008 4:01pm

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JohnstonCunning

I agree with joel. sry. I'm no role model when it comes to letting guys go. but still.............I'm sorry.

Tue, September 23rd, 2008 7:54pm

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again its ok..... thanks for the comment

Tue, September 23rd, 2008 5:47pm

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andrew nix

i liked it
yeah i agree with those 2^^ im sry

Fri, September 26th, 2008 4:31pm

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lol... the poem was meant to be as a friend and everyone thinks that im holding on but im not... well in that sence... thanks for the comment :)

Sat, September 27th, 2008 7:12pm

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downtoearthworm

Wow. Awesome poem! I give it two thumbs up!

Please comment on my stuff too! Your opinions are always appreciated! I've finished a new poem "Drops of water" Please check it out! ^^

Thu, October 16th, 2008 4:16pm

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thanks for the comment i will be sure to check out your stuff

Thu, October 16th, 2008 7:25pm

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Madmarky

very well written, if he is what keeps you writing so well dont let him go...lol, Just kidding. this is well put together...

Mon, October 27th, 2008 7:58am

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thank you sooo... much for the comment lol ill def check out your work :) ,/../

Mon, October 27th, 2008 5:03pm

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