Poem by: craaig
Submitted: March 05, 2008
© Copyright 2016 craaig. All rights reserved.
Those few words hold alot
Oops, I did it again:
responded outside of the box.
Oh well . . .
Thanks for the comment, poewhit.
I realy like this and the way you have captured the uncapturable! An emotion.
Thanks, Anna Therese.
Yeah, Always slippery, sometimes writhing, usually elusive for me without a net.
Such alot of thoughts and emotions for such a short verse....Take care Juliet
Bye for now.
AH I like how Anna described this ! you can really feel emotion through words and that you can not see or measure. yes it is not capturable and yet you have captured the essence here, great craaig!!! peace!!!!
Thanks for the feeling feed back that you, and others, give freely.
peace, love, hope,
I missed this haiku the other day when you posted... perhaps because it was my birthday and I was celebrating! Yes... I agree with Anna... you were successful in capturing an emotion and in a haiku at that!! a very nice write, craaig. Happy writing.....Jerry
I must learn not to 'comment' instead of 'replying'
to your comments. I'm so confused.
(See below for belated birthday wishes.)
Happy belated birthday to you!
And thanks for the comment and well-wishes.
I value them all.
All the best,
Fine Haiku craaig. More of these if you please. Ricky.
Thanks, Ricky. I tried another soon after this one but it just wouldn't come to me. Perhaps another sleep-less night.
Gosh U r so right...and i realised that many are like me...And u r so right...when the net stops, we get a chance to think....i always remember that response of urs...
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