Your Falling For Him Arent You?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Sheila has a crush on a guy but her two best-friends are busy either making out with their boyfriend or arguing with him.Its hard for her.

"Your falling for him aren't you?"She asked her.She nodded. Julia and Carla looked at each other for a moment."Sheila, he has many ex's.Are you sure?"Sheila nodded again. She had fallen for Chard Lewton, football quarterback."Sheila, you shouldn't. Trust us, we have experience,"Sheila sighed."I know. You've dated him." Carla blushed."The both of us,"She whispered. Sheila's eyes widened."Really?"Carla nodded. Hands covered Juila and Carla's faces.

"Guess who?"The two boys said in unision. "Drew, hooper, STOP. We know who you are."There was a slight pasuse."AWW....." said the two boys in unsion yet again." Sheila ran away. "What's up with squishy girl again?"Chief asked." I told you not to call her that." Julia glared at him."Oh yah.Sorry crazy."She punched him in the arm and looked at Drew and Carla.They were making out."Do they ever breathe?"She asked him.

 

"Dunno." 


Submitted: February 01, 2013

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Matthew D. Hay (Tangible Word)

You write characters well, and you're also an amazing writer :D Though I think it could've been more deloped as a story, this just felt like a snippet of a story, perhaps turning this into a full-fledged short story or novel? Just my opinion, loved this overall :D

Fri, February 1st, 2013 2:17pm

FrootLoop246

I agree 100% with Tangible Word. This idea would be awesome longer. But I'll give it to you. I CAN'T write short stories. Never have been able to, to I commend anyone who can wrap it all up, beginning to end, in only a few chapters! :)

Fri, February 1st, 2013 5:20pm

InfinityAndBeyond

Great story! I really wanna see more! Please can can we have some more? :-)

Sat, February 2nd, 2013 10:11pm

LilacAmethystBurgundy

2nd paragraph: 'unision'? 'pasuse'? 'unsion'?

Good story.

Mon, March 31st, 2014 12:31pm

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