The Sorcerer's Legacy

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic
This is a rewrite of Pandora's School. It was entered in The Strongest Start 5 competition on TheNextBigWriter. I would like to know what readers think of the story. Is it compelling? Would you keep reading it? Do you find anything confusing? I want honest feedback so I can improve on the story. I also may consider a rewrite in first person from the main characters perspective, and see if people relate to that more than the original story. Thank you, and hope you enjoy the story.

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The Sorcerer's Legacy

Submitted: June 13, 2011

This is a rewrite of Pandora's School. It was entered in The Strongest Start 5 competition on TheNextBigWriter. I would like to know what readers think of the story. Is it compelling? Would you keep reading it? Do you find anything confusing? I want honest feedback so I can improve on the story. I also may consider a rewrite in first person from the main characters perspective, and see if people relate to that more than the original story. Thank you, and hope you enjoy the story. Read Chapter

Submitted: June 13, 2011

The school was an immense modern castle. It was built with large granite bricks that sparkled in the sunlight, and many windows decorated... Read Chapter

Submitted: June 13, 2011

Steel left Fox's room running almost full speed. He had to get away before he changed his mind and ravaged her. This couldn't be ruined; ... Read Chapter