Poem by: Cris Ryen Blakeney
Submitted: July 22, 2012
Swimming, cooling, relaxing.
Vacation, outside, school, inside.
Snowing, warming, working.
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I love the transitional technique you used in this poem. The short words and lines give the poem a nice impact.:)
Haha, Thank you so much, I greatly appreciate the comment! Thanks for reading and reviewing!(:
Woah, this is thee actual shape of a typical year too! L.O.L. Good work!
Haha Thank you so much! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
For some weird reason I felt like I was singing a rhyme, it's so catchy! I love the way you placed the wording because it was somehow playful when you read it... I don't know how to explain it... wait yes I do: Basically I LOVED IT! ^^
Haha, well thank you so much! :D
Very very clever!
Thank you so very much! :D
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