Poem by: Cris Ryen Blakeney
Submitted: July 17, 2012
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Interesting style! I especially was fond of the words exulting and trills. Nice job. :)
Haha, there is a funny story to this one. I know I said that my other poem, "Unseen" or whatever it is called was my first poem, but what I meant was, it was my first poem after I realized I had a talent for writing poetry.
For this one, I was in my 8th grade english class and we were reading a boring book about ships and the sea. I took all the words at the end of each line from that text we were reading and this is what was made. I hope my explanation makes sense...(:
~future author (Cris)!!!(:
love the choice of words i like Daring it fell nicely in place with the rest. Please tell me when you write something
Haha, how about you just become a fan and get email updates haha. But I will be more than glad to give you updates. I just had no idea I could be so good and that you actually like it, or anyone for that matter. It just feels so unreal, you know? Thank you so much for your amazing comments! I love them so much! It's readers like you who inspire me!
You surprised me again.
Good, I'm glad! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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