Love the Tongue Of Flame

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic
Something I worked on in CRWR class and have posted to the young writer's Contest. It's in the top list of other's works however I do not mind if i Loose or win. I came this far, and I never been able to reach this in the past. ~ I am only posting it out to see if should do any changes to it further in the future, critics, comments, are welcome. But no insults, i will not listen to them. nor pay attention to them. Words can be more powerful that actions.

Submitted: February 23, 2012

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Clothe me with everlasting warmth
Feed me your sweet, convincing lies
Drive me to the peak of insanity
Whisper words of secrets
Feelings come to a close
All is lost, forgotten
The birth of betrayal
Surround me with your cruelty
Neglect me, Starve me
Push me out of my consciousness
Loose me in eternal night
A flame you are so pretty and bright
You shine your glory and endless light
Though pretty you may be
You do not decieve me
For a flame is not what it seems
it shouldnt be surrounded by all esteems
For one day it will extinguish
And we all will distinguish
It, as a subtle darkness
Its brightness and beauty will soon diminish.


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