Red Roses to Jessica Mae Loken

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Dedicated to Jessica. Who gave me love and helped me gain my personality. My Dearest to whom I have utmost repect.

Roses are red, my face is blue

I easily underestimate, my love for you

It haunts me at night, my burning dove

Soothed in light, my caressing love

You held my love, in painful trial

My love for you, without denial

If I had a rose, that became my life

I would make it thou, my wife

The calling, that drags my soul

The love, that keeps me whole 

Submitted: January 15, 2009

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Ow that was so sweet!

Mon, March 30th, 2009 9:33am


Thank you for the nice comment!

Mon, March 30th, 2009 6:28am

Brian W

Had to read this one just from the title.
A beautiful poem dedicated to Jessica. Good flow and rhyme and shows it comes from your heart. Keep writing

Fri, June 26th, 2009 11:00pm


Thank you, I wrote it for the one I love most

Fri, June 26th, 2009 4:09pm

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