Swim Team

Swim Team

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Umm..... Well this poem was inspired by my swimming days when I used to do it. I was going to do it competitively, but in finality I changed my mind.

I look at the water in jealousy, peace acquired without rivalry

Will I accomplish this pain, rainning over thy head

To take time from my love, the love that brings sincerity

Were I trod may only succeed, in hurting my god


Submitted: January 15, 2009

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Poetry sports water swimming

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