Sirens raging through the night
A woman screams from terrible fright
A simple crash is what they think
But was actually caused by one small drink
A crazy drive thougout the streets is like
a game of russian roulette with death playing for keeps
All of a sudden because you don't think
A sudden crash knocks you out of synce
As your blood fills the streets
as you close your eyes
Remember that you set your own demise
You made a stupid decision and now you can't turn back
Your life is over and that sadly is fact.
Your life is over and that sadly is fact
You made a stupid decision and now you can't turn back
As your blood fills the streets
as you close your eyes
Remember that you set your own demise
Because you don't think
a sudden crash knocks you out of synce
A crazy drive throughout the streets
like russian roulette with death playing for keeps
A simple crash caused by one small drink
A woman screams from terrible fright
Sirens raging through the night
Submitted: November 10, 2011
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Comments
That inversion in structure works so well with this, awesome.
Fri, November 11th, 2011 4:23am
Wow...so true and very graphic so people understand and can imagine it in there head. That's what I did. Good job!! ~Josh's Girl
Fri, November 11th, 2011 4:00pm
You obviously are a great motivator. (I read some of your poems.) This poem is really good.
Fri, November 11th, 2011 4:22pm
Nicely done! A clever piece telling a great story.
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Very good. I´ll keep reading your stuff. G
Thu, November 10th, 2011 7:52pm