««**My Happy Poem**»»
One that doesn't talk about wrong things
I'll write a happy poem
One that doesn't show you the sadness of the world
I'll write a happy poem
One that makes you laugh and smile...Simply fall in a pink love for life
I'll write a happy poem
One that doesn't talk about lost and cruelty
I'll write a happy poem
One without tears and broken hearts
I'll not write a sad poem
One that claims for revolution
That make you want to rise against what’s wrong
One that show you reality
That makes you fight for a different truth
I’ll not write a sad poem
One that makes you sad, anger and ready to retribution
That makes you so thirsty for justice
….No
As I said, I’ll write a happy poem
Full of lies and disguises
And where the guy gets the girl
Ending with “happy every after”
Just before the “The End
Submitted: July 23, 2012
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Comments
Great job. I love your use of anaphora in this piece. It really emphasizes that there is a counter message to your poem. Great work.
-Cord
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Nice, I like your way of thinking!(:
Tue, July 24th, 2012 12:35am~future author!!!(:
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Thanks.
Tue, July 24th, 2012 11:05am