Playing at making you different..... my oh my da lee la!!!!

Playing
 
My mind is capably rearranging
you.
I am playing at imagining,
that you are you;
the same, but somehow
different!
You should have been true,
but instead you are strange.
You are not
who you said you were.
And I am not in an
imaginary game.


Submitted: September 05, 2008

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EdwardJBradleySr

Da Lee La:

Most mysterious! Gave it an "I Like It" vote.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Fri, September 26th, 2008 7:23pm

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thanks Ed

Sat, September 27th, 2008 11:23pm

Marathongman

Gave it an I LIKE IT - It's a nice little gem of a poem. I like shorter poems

Sat, September 27th, 2008 3:32pm

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Thanks Marathongman - Woke up this morning (Sunday) and took my cup of tea over to my laptop to read emails and WOW it was like receiving a bunch of fresh spring flowers with all the comments you posted on my work. It is always so encouraging when someone leaves appreciative comments. Da Lee La

Sat, September 27th, 2008 11:26pm

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