My Mountain

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
A poem that I would really like some feedback on. This is my first submission and I'm not expecting it to be that good.

Submitted: December 23, 2010

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Submitted: December 23, 2010

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I spent a while preparing For a climb that is quite daring It will be ever so tough Lord, tell me I’m good enough Everyone must make a climb Though not everyone makes it in time Soon I shall begin my climb When the bells begin to chime Half-way up, I feel like death Afraid I may draw my final breathe Finally! I see the peak The place I so desperately seek Pulling myself atop, I stare at the sun Then realize with dread, I’ve climbed the wrong one


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