ill-fated love pt I

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Love gone wrong

Submitted: June 30, 2010

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Submitted: June 30, 2010



I remember the day I gave you a promise ring claiming to forever love you. 'Til death do us part' you had said. I thought we were happy until you had told me you had feelings for someone else. "Why?" I managed to choke out. "Why are you doing this to me? To us?" I asked holding back tears. "Because he makes me happy." you had said. And with that came the promise ring, back in my possession. "Please don't go" I had begged, grabbing her arm. "Let me go!" she screamed. I had released her but in doing so I quickly rushed towards the livingroom, shuffling through one of its drawers and grabbing a gun. "If I cannot have you then there's really no use....." As she heard me say these words she quickly turned around to see the gun in my mouth. "No!" you had screamed, rushing towards me. We wrestled for a while over control of the gun when suddenly a loud POP was heard. First there was blood, then nothing.

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