Letting Me Die

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

For Beautiful Disaster's challenge. I hope it's good and well-liked!

Letting Me Die

In the corner I quiver with fear

Just thought you were one I could trust

But now everything is changed

You said you'd never

And now all I want to do is die

Get myself away from you

Go to hell! Go to hell!

But now I'm the one departing

You inch toward me, your mouth agape

The look in your eyes, menacing

It's so compelling that I have to look

So entranced that I can't scream

You prey on that and lean into my neck

Your bite I feel

Piercing pain

All my blood is being drained

And I am gone.


Submitted: June 15, 2009

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My Beautiful Tragedy

Are you sure you didn't confuse my challenge with someone else's anyway if you didn't it was really good but I asked for a short story like a one-shot type of thing anyway I really liked it and it'll still be in the competition =] its just that I wish it could be a sort story because it is really good

Thu, June 25th, 2009 3:28am


IDK... were you the one who had the vampire/werewolf poem/short story/novel challenge? Some of these usernames are so similiar it's difficult.

Thu, June 25th, 2009 7:29am

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