im letting go!

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

its a poem about not being able to let go but move on anyways because you know its for the best hope you like it

its funny how we do our best to impress those we love

yet forget to do whats best for us

we sometimes make sacrafices just to see people smile

i know i got to change and thats

whyy i say im letting go save me from this road im on

i cant take it anymore im lost

&& confused for the first time in a long time im asking

for help because im letting go i

need you to be here and help me to tell me it'll all be ok

that im going to make it through i

look back and see how my life used to be i saw my life

flash before my eyes i didnt have time

to cry i simply held my head up &&said that i will change and so

will my life im sorry for the way ive been living my

life i know i have to change and thats why from this night on im letting go

im moving on and im going to make

it through even if it means going on with out you!

Submitted: September 27, 2011

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alot of emotions in there:) i like it!!!

Wed, September 28th, 2011 12:25am


thank you so much i was afraid it was pathetic

Tue, September 27th, 2011 6:45pm

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