just a stare

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

well, me and my girlfriend were eating and I just stared at her and so much came to my mind, so i decided to write it down. I did this as a way to express myself, and hope this gets me somewhere. she is my inspiration. by the way, this is my first poem i hope you like it.

In a quiet and peaceful moment
With our love in the air
Even if the occasion is the most important
I would just quietly stare...
My thoughts would be discordant
And i wish my thoughts with you i could share
And briefly i'll try to explain:

I think of how in the future united
And of how i need to prepare
I think of the day that we'll both be excited...
Of the one day in the altar
With many kinsmen all reunited
Will just wait for a yes.

Then i remember i'm with you
Or you notice what i'm doing there
Then i smile and you do too
All this in a few seconds, with just a stare


Submitted: January 04, 2011

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tattooedmoon

Hi Dear:) I'm glad you put nice summary to the poem; where did you get your inspiration & stuff coz if you didn't it'll be a little bit confusing but none the less this is very sweet. When you stare at her you fantacize the two of you getting married am i ryt? i hope i get the message og your poem right;)
Keep me updated if you pfst new one & do drop by my page & if you like you can read & comment o any of my work. Thankyou!

Wed, January 5th, 2011 2:30pm