Love Undone: The Beginning

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic
It starts off simple and innocent. A dream, they're all innocent, right? As we enter the series, we enter the young but grown relationship of John and Candace. Come along and join them on this very adventurous love RollerCoaster...

Submitted: March 19, 2015

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It was hot && raining outside, and pitch black. This kind of weather always reminded him of her. He began to drift off and think of her as the thunder boomed and the lightening lit the dark night sky. Her Hennesy complected skin tone, her slim, curvaceous frame, the way her tight, wet, pussy grabbed his shaft as they danced between the sheets all night long. Karma was every man's fantasy, and every woman's nightmare. Just the thought of her made his penis stand at full attention, just hearing her voice made it jump. Just as he began to yank and pull on his long, thick, shaft, the doorbell rang. 

 
**ding dong** 
 
He jumped up out of his trance and pulled up his sweatpants. 
 
"Who the fuck is this?" 
 
He spat, as he ran down the stairs to invite in his unwanted guest. As he looked through the peephole he tried to make out the mysterious figure that stood before him, but to no avail. Cautiously, he opened the door. Slowly, it creaked as he peeped through the chain. Only to see her beautiful brown eyes, wet, wavy hair, and flawless skin await him on the other side.
 
**BOOM**
 
He slammed the door shut and fumbled with the chain to let her in. The front of the body drenched from the rain that snuck under the patio.
 
"Hurry John. I haven't all night."
 
She said in her soft, sweet, ever so enchanting southern accented voice.
 
The door suddenly swings open. She pounces on him. Passionately, they kiss and caress one another. He walks over to the couch and throws her on it.
 
"Your coat, OFF."
 
He orders her as she looks innocently into his soul. She stands up, drops her coat to the floor, and looks him in the eyes as she awaits her next order from her master. He steps towards her and grips her firm, nicely rounded, ass, as he says in his  sexy baritone voice;
 
"I've been waiting on this all day. What the FUCK took you so long?"
 
He simultaneously smacks her ass with one hand, and uses the other to force three of his fingers up her tight, wet pussy. She moans out;
 
"I'm sorry Daddy."
 
He retorts;
 
"Bitch I know that. I said what the fuck took so long?"
 
He spins her around. She almost loses balance in the six inch stilettos she's wearing. He then pushes her onto the couch on all fours, and forces his twelve inch dick inside her; opening up her walls. She moans.
 
"I'm waiting! What The Fuck Took Your Little Ass So Long?!"
 
He screams as he takes advantage of her. She continues moaning. She doesn't want to tell him why she kept him waiting. 
 
"And what gives you the right to rush me?! Huh?! HUH ?!"
 
He pulls her head back by her hair and smacks her ass at the same time. She tries to run, but soon realizes she can go any further than the back of the couch. He thrusts in and out, in and out, each time 50 times harder than the time before. Tears begin to form in her eyes, but she doesn't know why. 
 
**WHAP ????** 
 
He smacks her in the face. Two tears fall, but she knows better than to complain about it. She shakes it off and decides to fuck him back. Harder. He thrusts, she pushes back, he thrusts, she pushes back, this goes on for at least 15 minutes. Each time he thrusts harder. Each time she pushes back with so much force it almost knocks him off his feet, literally.
 
"Get on your knees. Better yet, squat. Suck my dick, bitch. Don't stop until i say so."
 
She squats down && welcomes all of him into her warm mouth. Forward, back, forward, back. She continuously motions her head this way, until they're both bored. She then begins to make her tongue dance on his tip. Wiggle fast. Wiggle slow. Circular. Lick all the way down. Then back up.
 
"What the fuck. It's been an hour and a half. Why hasn't..."
 
Her thoughts are interrupted as his body begins to convulse as if he has slipped into a seizure. Her tongue tricks always does it for him. Forward, back, forward, back. She begins this motion with her head again. This time faster, and her lips tighter around his shaft. She makes sure the tip taps her tonsils with every forward motion. Suddenly, his man juices burst into her mouth. She swallows and continues her tongue tricks. This time, to his balls. Shortly, his body shakes and he cums again. 
 
Out of energy, his knees begin to buckle & he collapses on the couch. She crawls over to him, & sits between his legs. He rubs her back. She looks up at him. He bends down and kisses her forehead. She lays her head on his thigh. He turns on the television. 
 
She loves nights like this. But she's wrong for keeping him so long, and she knows it. She kisses his thigh. And they both become consumed by the episode of Martin on the television. Satisfied and wrapped up in one another they fall into their own little world. He slides on the floor with her. He begins kissing her. Then, almost unnoticed, he slides inside her warm pleasure hole. She moans. He kisses her.
 
"I'm sorry."
 
She whispers.
 
**ding dong**
 
He ignores it. 
 
**ding dong*
 
They ignore it.
 
**ding dong**
 
"Don't worry baby I'll handle it."
 
She stands up and wraps a
cover around her naked, curvaceous body. She prances to the door and peeps through the peep hole. She opens the door. A short, sexy, brown skinned beauty walks through the door and greets his sultry woman with a long wet kiss on her lips. The women embrace each other. Karma drops the cover to the floor. Her sexy female companion grips and grinds on her naked body. She rips off her clothes. The girls go at it like two underpaid female porn stars. John, shocked, amused, and surprised, begins to play with his penis. Karma grabs her girlfriend's hand, and walks toward John.
 
They all begin to kiss. Karma assumes the position as John falls behind her && begins to fuck her. Hard. At the same time she begins to lick the other girl's pussy. The three try an abundance of positions within a half hour. Then suddenly,
 
**ding dong**
 
John jumps up out of his sleep && looks at the time. 
 
"Shit!"
 
**KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK**
 
He runs down the stairs, opens the door and greets his angry girlfriend. He kisses her cheek & smirks. She'd kill him if she knew about the dream he just had about HER. 


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