Hand in hand

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is just a random poem I wrote, though I guess it could have some meaning to it lol.

Hold me tight, hold me close

Tell me what I want to hear the most

Say it softly, say it slow

Tell me that you'll never go

Breathe slow, but breathe deep

Watch over me as I sleep

Catch my tears as they fall

Help me stand strong and tall

Take my hand and open my eyes

Hold me up so I can reach the sky

Protect me, take me in

Make it rain on me and wash away my sins

Open me up, take away my pain

Stop the hurt, make me sane

Pick up my pieces and put me back together

Take my heart, keep it forever

Don't drift, stay near

Together we can fight all our fears

Hand in hand is how we lay

Hand in hand is how we'll stay


Submitted: April 17, 2007

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emmauck

awe! really cute! i love it!

Tue, April 17th, 2007 2:51pm

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Thanks so much!!!

Tue, April 17th, 2007 9:19pm

ddrandall

really enjoyed this piece... thanks for sharing it!

Tue, April 17th, 2007 2:51pm

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Thankyou so much for reading it, I'm glad you enjoyed it!!!

Tue, April 17th, 2007 9:20pm

EdwardJBradleySr

dancerjive:

Well written. Communicates most effectively. Your expectations of another.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Tue, April 17th, 2007 11:16pm

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Thanks so much.

Tue, April 17th, 2007 9:21pm

rebel

THIS IS UNBELIEVABLE. ONE OF YOUR BEST FOR SURE!!! OMG, IT REALLY MAKES YOU THINK GIRL! NICE WORK!

Wed, April 18th, 2007 10:09am

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lol thanks so much!!!!

Wed, April 18th, 2007 8:34am

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