Unfortunate

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Thrillers  |  House: Booksie Classic

An unsuccessful escape!

As the sunshine licked my face, tears collected in my eyes. The pale, fluffy horizon seemed welcoming and a soft breeze made me sniff to absorb the utmost beauty. I could sense freedom, an end to suffering but then the alarm buzzed to life. The cacophony of sounds, of the helicopters, the deafening shrieks and sirens destroyed the peace I was enjoying.

I was caught and now I sit behind the bars again with my punishment extended to further 5 years.


Submitted: July 29, 2015

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Rhynne Asad

I'm not completely sure what's happening here, but I don't think I'm meant to. I liked this quite a lot, and look forward to more!

Wed, July 29th, 2015 11:17am

Rhynne Asad

Allow me to change my comment, I do understand what it's about. Still absolutely adore this, only I reread it and remembered to read the summary.

Wed, July 29th, 2015 11:18am

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Thank you for your feedback!

Thu, July 30th, 2015 3:14am

Cezaan

Good work at a very young age. Keep it up. keep writing.

Thu, July 30th, 2015 6:02pm

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Thanks!

Thu, July 30th, 2015 12:11pm

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