His Basement
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Short Story by: Daniel1120
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Woahhhhhh that twist at the end!!!!! Amaaazing! God your description was so so good,'really it my skin crawling and had me cringing in my seat XP really really good, but I think it could do with some more proof reading? The plots amazing though, and a really good length, very punchy and easily keeps the reader's attention, and also I don't know I'd it was just me, but there were some words which I didn't really understand about... Idk they just didn't really make sense. But anyway, great work! Keep it up :)
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