Those rhymes of yours

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

I just got a burst of emotion so i wrote it down. This is my first ever poem, inspired by someone who i remembered :)


why does it feel so weird,
im hurting day by day,
but all around me people singing
what are they trying to say?
i dont know where im going
but i know just how to get
there, and on my journey i will take
you with me, ive got no doubt.
why everything is difficult in
my world ill never know,
but whatevers holding us back from
eachother is my foe
ill confront it head on,
no fear, just hope, hope and
dreams that we can fight it both
together, in each others arms
but you, you over there,
you dont need the dreams or
the hope i have deep within me
you just go, straight for
so i need to know what to do
here, now in this time;
youll tell me, be my guide
and ill listen to your rhymes
ill give you my ears and soul,
if i get to your heart.

Submitted: April 03, 2012

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truly beautiful. love the layout and clarity of what its about. first poem of yours my ass. its unbelievably fantastic

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 1:11am


Wow, thankyou so much! :) This is my first poem and im thrilled you like it!!! :D

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 6:15pm

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