When is it love?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

I know, its really crap; I had a spur of something so i wrote this :)

 

When is it love?
 
 
were here right now
what have we got to lose?
 
we're there tomorrow
im starting to feel confused
 
split up again
now im in the blues
 
together today
my feelings are bruised
 
closer, our hearts touch
about to transfuse
 
but no, move away
emotion is overused
 
we're there tomorrow
in love.
 


Submitted: April 03, 2012

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smallggal

i think it really shows how confusing a relationhip can be. i think the short sentences show how quick your thoughts change too. nice work :)

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 10:51pm

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thankyou so much for the comments! xx

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 7:36pm

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