decisions decisions

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: True Confessions  |  House: Booksie Classic

a struggle i'm sure many, many people deal with..

if i break the skin

i'll feel no pain.

 

but without hurt,

is there gain?

 

i'll feel so numb

i'll feel so good

i'll feel so young

just like i should

 

no... i can't

i must do whats right

i must be strong

i must win the fight

 

yes i can

and it won't be hard

the answer is in my hands

i can heal my heart

 

but its not real

its not the solution

the joy i'll feel

is just an illusion

 

think, whats better?

comfort that's "fake"

or would i rather

grief and ache?

 

i should not listen

to my own lies

i should not give in

i'll be alright

 

but i've readied the needle

so its time to decide

good or evil

which one am i?


Submitted: April 21, 2011

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Emmyboo95

Wow, this is really good! I love the way it deliberates between good and bad.. the simplicity makes it more effective. A really good poem! Well done... :]

Thu, April 21st, 2011 3:24pm

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ahh!
i am glad you think so!
especially since i feel as though, this is not one of my better ones!
you should read the others, if you haven't!
you might enjoy them

Thu, April 21st, 2011 8:55am

Solianto

Awesome. I like this.

Thu, April 21st, 2011 6:01pm

Claire van der Kerc

Rhyming poems! I'm so terrible at them! Haha anyway this one is really good.

"but i've readied the needle, so it's time to decide good or evil, which one am i?"

Mon, April 25th, 2011 3:49pm

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ah thanks!
i always try to give my writing some sort of a rhyme scheme.
but sometimes i feel myself not wanting to, because i think i would be able to express my meaning a lot more efficiently if i were ever just brave enough to use the right wording.

Mon, April 25th, 2011 10:46am

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