This is a different kind of writing then i am used to. It is still a work in progress. There will most likely be changes made in the near future as well as additions to what is already there. I hope you enjoy it.

Her hair reminiscent of a scarlet rose, each pedal, each fragment as beautiful and softening as the rest.

In the night, she breaks in to shards of autumn, and fires rage. Captivated by the world in which she perceives, with her verdant eyes.

How joyful it must be to hold ever in your heart, what brings you dream and tender embrace in the night.

Taken by everything you are, even time slows, to behold such enticement.

Oh, scarlet rose, how sweet it is to be in your company.

Behold the violent light, shining gracefully upon her weary eyes. Her heart pricked by the thorn of love shall bleed to bitter truth.

A victim of her grand desire, unattainable and unquenchable. Her dreams overflow in shallow sleep. Uncontainable is the wonder of her creative mind

Oh, scarlet rose, how lovely it is to be in your company.

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Submitted: January 05, 2013

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CherryBomb180

Beautiful, DannyWestSide. :) What else can I say? Well written. :3

Sat, January 5th, 2013 10:05am

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Thanks, CherryBomb. I'm glad you liked it. Maybe I'll see some of your writing on here one day. :)

Sat, January 5th, 2013 2:17am

Hüseyin Abudharr Ali-Diakides

Beautiful

Sat, January 5th, 2013 7:51pm

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Thank you :)

Sat, January 5th, 2013 4:11pm

Haineko14

Just lovely! A beautiful poem :)

Sat, January 5th, 2013 8:25pm

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Thanks, yet again, Haineko. I'm glad you have taken out the time to comment on my work. I'm fairly new to the site and getting feedback already is very motivating. I'll make sure to check out your own writing today. :)

Sat, January 5th, 2013 4:11pm

Haineko14

I'm glad you've done more to this.I think your writing and the way you give these vivid images is incredible :) I also really thank you for you giving my poetry your time! Good comments always bring more motivation to do even better.

Sat, January 19th, 2013 9:46pm

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Thanks for your comment and for taking the time to read this again. I'll be sure to continue reading your poetry.

Sat, January 19th, 2013 5:06pm

Lisa Ayers

Hi Danny, beautiful imagery and word flow. This is awesome!

Wed, February 13th, 2013 6:27am

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Thanks again Lisa! I was very delicate with this one. I'll be sure to read some of your writing when I get the chance. :)

Tue, February 12th, 2013 11:52pm

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