Answer to Kritika's challenge->SCAR FOR LIFE

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I had to write a poem with this sentence:
THE ANCIENT PYRAMIDS ARE STUPENDOUS

For example:
The fear on your face was big.
He was like a stabbing knife getting in my heart.
Eternal scar on my mind.
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Submitted: June 29, 2008

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Scar for life

The fear on your face was big.

He was like a stabbing knife getting in my

heart.

Eternal scar in my mind.

Always will stay there,not going away.

Neither one of us can forget that moment.

Creepy,scary moment of death.

In our hearts that scar will always stay.

Even when we go to perfect place,where you

  see love only.

Never will disapear from our minds,fear.

That wicked death,always and for ever

  with us.

Pleding her to leave us,but she wont.

You was terrifeid so much,loosing hope

  every time more and more.

Reaping death on this world,she laughed

  and laughed.

Always will stay there,not going away.

Memory on that moment.

I was scared as  you,but still I am getting

better,but you...

Darkness has ruled your world,darkness and

fear.

Sweet boy you were,but now,now you changed.

A scar is still there,in your beautiful heart.

Reaping fear more and more,standing there.

Energy is bleaching from you every time you

remember of that vicious moment.

Standing there in the dark and fear,you dont

talk any more.

Thinking of death every second.

Use your mind,comon,dont let her win.

Please I beg you,dont!

Eternety is there,waiting for you,for you

  who is giving up from life.

Nowing she will win,you watch with your eyes

full of fear into nothingness,hoping scar will

fade away.

Death,please dont take me away,you said,but...

Out there she is getting closer to you,and Im still

  begging you to not give up.

Useles was everything I did.

Scream I heard,tear I saw,on your beautiful face, a

  scream for help, a tear for end,scar for life.


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