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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just a poem about me and my attempts to break my habit ...

You dont know it.
I dont show it.
You are my happiness.
You are my
What you are?

I try to knock on your door,
but I make mistakes trough it all.
I dont know why I shut my self
I dont know why i lie and pretend.

You dont know it.
I dont show it.
You are my red rose the dearest one.
Who cut me sudden,but still...
It looks so nice.

I try to break my habit.
Act like I act before.
I dont know anymore why its worth
I know it's not alright,so I try and try.

Falling deeper into darkness
Falling deeper in my web of lies.
I dont know why I say what I dont mean.
Tonight I said it all.

You dont know it.
I dont show it.
You are my love.
My all.

I am ripped apart,desperate so sad,
knowing it was a lie.
I tried to hide.I tried to get out.
Stop this pain now,but
my heart is not letting me.

I wont fight again and this is how it ends.

Submitted: May 16, 2009

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WoW, this makes me think and wonder alot. It makes me wonder what types of things your going through, and at the same time part of me can relate to the words in my own way. Great poem

Sat, May 16th, 2009 8:58pm


Thank you so much! For reading my poem and for commenting.Really,thanks. :)

Sat, May 16th, 2009 2:01pm

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