read this please.its short.Thanks :)

Suffering silently in a shadow of a night.

Suffering painful in a darkness of a sky.

Suffering and hoping my love will come.

Suffering and expecting a small ray of light

in a dark sky.


Submitted: June 05, 2008

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Vampire Angel

This had some good imagery in it i liked this alot. Especially the part when you said "Suffering silently in a shadow of a night that was cool.:)

Thu, June 5th, 2008 10:14pm

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haha,thanks a lot.

Sat, June 7th, 2008 9:31am

Dark Skylight

thanks again.:)

Fri, June 6th, 2008 2:30pm

Sameera1127

Diz iz sad,but good in poet'z verzion.
Give 8 out of 10.

Mon, June 9th, 2008 1:10am

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Thanks alot.:)

Mon, June 9th, 2008 7:47am

yuu shindemura

this is your first post so i ought to read it! it's intriguing, dark skylight!XD

yeah i agree a small light can light well in the darkest parts...same as a small ray of light in a dark sky. ^.^

Wed, February 25th, 2009 1:51pm

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lol,yea it can,lol.Thanks! :) xd hh

Fri, February 27th, 2009 2:02pm

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