Status:
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Genre: Poetry |
House:
Booksie Classic
well okay ive put up alot of my poems and im a beginner and i just wanted to ask ppl who read them if they can comment me and give me advice and stuff. It would be very appreciated
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Sun, November 19th, 2006 3:55pm
You get two stars for the ether. The vibes
of the universe certainly resonate from this
unique and unimaginable piece of modern
GenX?-perhaps vissitudinal vocality.
Hark, Hark the openness required ibidality.
Perhaps sparks to tango the mangoes?? Anyway, undue
and open verse like this should not be left
unfruitful!!
So it is to the spirit of the Muse!!
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