Bones of war

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

Bones of war

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They say that they will fall,

they say that they will crawl,

they say,

so many things,

like the enemy doesnt have wings,

to say in there last breath.

Whats yours isnt myne,

and whats myne isnt yours,

and the wars shall be over,

for the sake of a bone,

whom the words was more important,

than alone.

But i guess they will die in vain,

words are still here,

and a bones are still alone,

whom i was born,

many times before,

of the war, of its pain,

of the war, its a shame,

to exist, in this world,

of me.


Submitted: May 10, 2011

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AemmaBella

*thumbs up * You're really good :)

Tue, May 10th, 2011 9:48pm

Frank Ramtahal

Remarkable poem. There is one spelling error together with the ones I pointed out in your previous poem. If you do not like me to point out your mistakes, you can let me know.

Tue, May 10th, 2011 11:42pm

Hayley Elizabeth Ariveer

Very interesting, and I have to admit I like it! Very good;)

Wed, May 11th, 2011 4:11am

Darkie

Nice poem...interesting....Under the influence...thumbs up ^_^

Wed, May 11th, 2011 7:45am

darkism

thank you all for getting the time of reading it :)

Fri, May 13th, 2011 5:19pm

Christian Taylor

Great poem! :) I really like this one.

Sat, May 14th, 2011 12:50am

shika

AWESOME Poem!!!I loved it!!!Your poem makes me think so much- what kinda creature I woulda been in my previous birth!!!Do you really believe in rebirth?

Sat, May 14th, 2011 8:31am

Graeme Montrose

Indeed a well rounded poem with significant meaning

Sun, May 15th, 2011 7:06am

Demyx306

Nice poem,man!

Tue, May 17th, 2011 6:52pm

Moonlightwritter

Nice. I like this.

Thu, May 26th, 2011 10:06pm

BEASTLYAK47

Bones...it's Gears not bones...well,it's okay...

Sat, November 12th, 2011 8:01pm

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