Breeze love

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This is poem,in which is for the pic. challange that Zaphera

Wish me luck xD


Everybody is smart from the certain point,but when you open your mouth

you reallize,that you are traped in your own decoy, you want to be honest,

but there is just something that is pushing you away from this.

Actions preveale actions i guess, and in some point you ask yourself,

why am i doing this? , is mybe the untrust that weve tryed to put on

ourselfs , or no love in this lost freindship, whos swimming in the sea

with no breeze throught the air arround me, my thoughts are like vacum,

need the air to servive, need your thoughts of your mind or just reallization

of our freindship.

Your silent voice and your actions teel me that you dont want to see me anymore,

but i will ask you one more time, just to be certan.

Can we countinue to be freinds? . Or you want to quit all,that we had.

Just a simple qestion from the boy who seemd confuised of your silence,but mainly


Submitted: November 02, 2010

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I love your poems, they always have such feeling to them and I always feel as if your letting us see a part of your soal that normaly would be hiden. For this I thank you and also for joining my challenge it's always great to read one of your works^8^

Sat, November 6th, 2010 12:57pm


Thank you,i really apreciat it, that you like it, and yes,im
normaly shy person,so i let my feeling out,through the paper xD
tnx again for everything!!


Sat, November 6th, 2010 7:03am

Abby Woods

Another poem that is so touching. :)

Fri, November 12th, 2010 11:36pm



Fri, November 12th, 2010 4:09pm


wow. that's really all I can say. Ur like overflowing with talent. Don't ever stop writing.:)

Thu, December 16th, 2010 11:55am


thanks, and i wwont :P

Mon, December 20th, 2010 1:01am

glitter snow426

very cool, love it!! It's me, Vincey Delaney, I have a new name now!! This is so down to earth, great stuff! If you get the chance, drop over to see my new story, Finding Out, Surprisingly. Thanks, take care, Vincey.

Sun, January 9th, 2011 7:11am


SUPERB poem!!!truly nice and I LOVED it very much!!!GREAT work!!!Keep it up : D

Sat, May 14th, 2011 4:10pm

Christian Taylor

Your so good at putting your feelings front and center that the reader can feel what your feeling! Excellent work!

Sat, October 29th, 2011 6:37pm

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